Boy, this chapter was a bear. It’s usually Chapter 4 that gives me problems. I hope this isn’t a sign of things to come.
I finished editing the second half of the chapter, which is told from the heroine’s point-of-view. It was essentially a total rewrite, because I had something stupid happen. I must have been really tired when I wrote the first draft of this. It was frustrating, because of the time it took. At the same time, it’s good because I’m getting a better understanding of the connection between Josie and Spencer.
I just can’t help it. They’re a cute couple.